Friday, September 10, 2010

Us five update

After one on one with Jamie here are some notes that were taken.

Pattern is too feminine.
Most sophisticated type out of all.
Colors need to be more vibrant
Finesse the cat, make more manly.
Layers are good, take shapes from here.
Baby blue is nice, but way to busy.
Good contrast in type.
Cat is too large. Hierarchy needs to be 'Us five', cat, pattern
Most integrated image
Most vibrant color.
Change pattern, less lacy
Have more contrast in type
Make date and time bigger
Good angles
Work around the type in this.

1 comment:

  1. In your newer iterations I also suggest that you keep the band name united (joe lovano "us five"). Make fewer changes in type. E.g. If you change typeface then keep the words in close proximity. Or if you change proximity/spatial placement then keep the same typeface, etc.