Type 3: Tender Buttons Layout update

Working through the idea and concept exploration I've come up with an idea of fragmenting the poems by taking out words I feel that have no purpose to each fragmented sentence, then separating them and putting them on the opposite page, so each page is missing "vital" information for the audience to understand. After developing this idea Kidwell suggested I find a better way to connect the pages together so that it's a clear message. So, therefore I will explore and see what I can do.

This is the basic idea. I want to explore typeface and also size.