After critique on Wednesday while showing some corrections I addressed from the family prototyping day, I had some additional corrections.
Adding an airplane or bird to the inside to show more of what my concept is.
While trying to integrate the side note of rolling down the hill between two sculptures.
Also, adding an image of what the bird eyes look like on the instructions page. There was a suggestions of showing images for instructions, but when I started doing that I found there were more images than space let to have.
Then I added some pattern pages to incorporate in the arts and crafts station.