Some criticisms that were made were to make my descriptions about each of my pieces should be smaller. Show some process instead of talking about it in my description. Finesse my resume, be more delicate, and sensitive with the type. Get rid of the "contact info", and play down my phone number a bit. Also, get rid of the dates on each slide.
Another idea was to combine the first two pages to be one, since they basically do the same thing.
